David Kirtley

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StoryGeisha marandina3211 months 6 days ago
StoryThe Coronation Of Charles III, the ‘Green’ King by Alfred N.Muggins Part 3 David Kirtley311 months 6 days ago
StoryA tribute to my beating heart tan63211 months 1 week ago
StoryThe Coronation Of Charles III, the ‘Green’ King by Alfred N.Muggins Part 2 David Kirtley311 months 1 week ago
StoryDoodle. Maxine Jasmin-Green.411 months 1 week ago
StoryRussell chapter 1 The great family mix up valiswaverider211 months 1 week ago
StoryA Kiss At The Castle mcscraic411 months 1 week ago
StoryMopeds in Marrakesh Mark Say1311 months 1 week ago
StoryThe Coronation Of Charles III, the ‘Green’ King by Alfred N.Muggins Part 1 David Kirtley311 months 1 week ago
StoryA king’s labour Rhiannonw411 months 2 weeks ago
StoryPutinpot’s May Day! : Atonement! By Alfred N.Muggins David Kirtley511 months 2 weeks ago
StoryThe ‘Green’ King by Alfred N.Muggins David Kirtley811 months 2 weeks ago
Story Smart-World Ed Crane211 months 2 weeks ago
StoryA Trip to the Supermarket (Tesco’s) After Work! By Mr Alfred N.Muggins Part 1 David Kirtley311 months 4 weeks ago
StoryCoronavirus Runs Amok In India :Thoughts by Alfred N.Muggins David Kirtley312 months 3 days ago
StoryMurder of the Innocents jxmartin312 months 4 days ago
StoryPreparing to Walk ice rivers31 year 4 hours ago
StoryPick A City Ewan51 year 15 hours ago
StoryWandering Through the Wondering drkevin21 year 5 days ago
StoryA Night to Remember marandina211 year 1 week ago
StoryPutin’s Blessing on the Old Soviet Union : An Anti Alternative View of Easter In Ukraine and Russia by Alfred N.Muggins David Kirtley71 year 1 week ago
StoryBitty Bsarbie Boob part 3 jeand191 year 1 week ago
StoryIt Is About Time The Law Was Changed. Maxine Jasmin-Green.81 year 1 week ago
StoryEaster : A Prayer For The Future by Alfred N.Muggins David Kirtley131 year 1 week ago
StoryHappy Easter, y'all jxmartin51 year 1 week ago

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You have packed rich imagery

Posted on Tue, 30 May 2023

You have packed rich imagery into this poem, which describes the place and animals very well. It did remind me of a safari I once went on in Kenya too!

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I started doodling when I was

Posted on Sat, 13 May 2023

I started doodling when I was at school. From there I decided to build up the doodles into proper pieces on separate pieces of paper, which I did for many years, creating many works of my own art which I still enjoy looking at to this day, and...

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Some great descriptions there

Posted on Wed, 10 May 2023

Some great descriptions there: I particularly liked, and felt saddened by 'lost sunsets of Hiroshima'!

Also 'neon dreams of the Orient' , which somehow seems to sum up the present days perfectly!

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I enjoyed the poem. It paints

Posted on Wed, 10 May 2023

I enjoyed the poem. It paints pictures of Japan for me which means it has worked! I am not sure I will ever fully appreciate what it might be to be Geisha, certainly mysterious like so much about Japan, and also beautiful! But this certainly...

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I appreciated the blunt or

Posted on Sun, 07 May 2023

I appreciated the blunt or realistic angle of your poem. I like the way you said it, even though I don't feel too negative about the monarchy right now.

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This is a great and rather

Posted on Tue, 02 May 2023

This is a great and rather frightening short story! You have imagined a tidy future with no waste, in which it seems all of us must plan for our demise, one way or another. I haven't quite worked out whether his final unexpected recycling was...

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An amusing and quite

Posted on Wed, 19 Apr 2023

An amusing and quite recognisable synopsis of hand/arm holding options, and walking paces! I often wonder how soldiers manage to stay in step when marching! My wife doesn't always want to hold hands if it is winter and she hasn't got gloves on,...

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Posted in Preparing to Walk

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So sad, and it does and

Posted on Fri, 07 Apr 2023

So sad, and it does and should make us angry. He should certainly take responsibility at that age. I suppose he will pay for it in many ways as he goes through life. I do think the community should know who did it, and be aware of the danger that...

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Posted in It Is About Time The Law Was Changed.

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I did appreciate reading this

Posted on Sat, 08 Apr 2023

I did appreciate reading this this morning, at Easter as well! You really report your experiences in hospital so well and truthfully. It is a real insight for those of us who are not yet needing that level of assistance/medical intervention. It...

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I am pleased to read your

Posted on Thu, 09 Mar 2023

I am pleased to read your evidence of animals dreaming too. Dreams are quite fascinating. I just wish I could write mine down, but they are gone before I can get the pen in my hand usually!

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