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Posted on Thu, 21 Sep 2017
a few clean up notes
get rid of a couple "littles"
clarify this sentence" The look, in her mind’s eye, that right now made her want to her jump right back on one and go home"
seek alternatives to the word "seem" ( appear,...Read full comment
Posted in Wrinkles
Thanks for reading David
Posted on Mon, 14 Nov 2022
Every band that I was ever in at sometime in the set played House of the Rising Sun. When I started my band, I made sure to recruit a keyboard player with his Farafisa to do the Alan Price songs. We never played Tambourine Man because nobody had...Read full comment
Posted in Remember Georgia Smith