ice rivers

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I have 352 stories published in 14 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 51203 times and 54 of my stories have been cherry picked.
4 of my 215 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 5 votes

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Fear the Supernatural?

Should we fear the supernatural? Oh yeah. We are the supernatural. We are the only conscious existences on earth. God damn it And he/she did.... as...

Peace with Honor

I rarely hear from the reclusive Thornton Krell. I saw this quotation today from Krell on another site and decided to share it. "Rocket Man describes...
Cherry

Road to Enlightenment

My road to enlightenment passes through Buddha and the Buffalo Bills. Buddhism lacks an almighty God figure but provides a gateway to enlightenment...

A Model of Incremental Repetition

DID You Miss Me When I was Gone? I missed you that's why I'm so glad to be back. I turn on my lamplight and get a shadowy glimpse of many of you. I'm...

Floop

Floop lied to Blanche Black when she asked “so, how did you get that nickname.” “It’s the way I pronounced Phillip when I was a child” Floop fibbed...

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4 of my comments have received 5 Great Feedback votes

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simply irresistible

Posted on Thu, 21 Sep 2017

a few clean up notes

get rid of a couple "littles"

clarify this sentence" The look, in her mind’s eye, that right now made her want to her jump right back on one and go home"

seek alternatives to the word "seem" ( appear,...

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Posted in Wrinkles

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I like it

Posted on Thu, 31 Aug 2017

I think I could use some indentations.

My favorite line....."In a way, it’s sort of like I’m feeling the story, connected with the characters beyond sight. Truly in touch with it, if you want.”

want might be will

Good work...

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Posted in Eyes

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very promising

Posted on Sun, 21 Feb 2016

I will continue to read which is the height of compliment, isn't it?

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Posted in Mistress and Servant Part 1

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paragraphing is important

Posted on Sun, 14 Feb 2016

yes it is and your paragraphing style moves the reader briskly through the content. Maybe reconsider the commas in the last sentence. I love it when stories end with a very short parageraph. Bravo

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Posted in Play, You...Play Me