32 of my comments have received 35 Great Feedback votes
Posted on Thu, 21 Sep 2017
a few clean up notes
get rid of a couple "littles"
clarify this sentence" The look, in her mind’s eye, that right now made her want to her jump right back on one and go home"
seek alternatives to the word "seem" ( appear,...Read full comment
Posted in Wrinkles
excellent advice Tom
Posted on Sat, 19 Mar 2022
My books are basically love stories to my wife. I'll give you the link to the latest one, https://www.amazon.com/dp/B09W1734YB?ref_=pe_3052080_397514860.
You're...Read full comment
Posted in Romance
so skillfully realized
Posted on Thu, 17 Jun 2021
I admire/envy the meticulous rendering of your imagination. The care you take in construction and grammar makes this story that much more spellbinding and engaging. Bravo, Penny..Bravoe. And Hipswell is downright Dickensian.Read full comment
Posted in "Willow's Tail" 11
Posted on Thu, 07 Jan 2021
A leader does what nobody else is doing...that's why they're leaders.
Once again I could go on and on with dates and quotes and stats to defend my point of view but what's the point? I've never hated Trump and still don't. As a...Read full comment
Posted in Loser, Loser, Loser