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The Great Pretender! By Alfred N Muggins
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14/11/24 / 25/11/24 And in these late times, it came to pass that the Great Pretender received much support from Churches across America. They...
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21st Century Saviour : Prime Minister Alfred Muggins!
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21/7/24 (1/8/24) Alfred becomes Prime Minister in the Modern Age, winning contests within the Labour Party and becoming their leader. He had already...
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Sojourn In Palestine (Welcome To Palestine!) by Alfred N.Muggins : Part 2
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Featuring the Three Wise Men! (Written June 2024) Melchior was taken to a cell nearby to be questioned further, while the other two wise men were...
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Sojourn In Palestine (Welcome To Palestine!) by Alfred N.Muggins : Part 1
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Featuring the Three Wise Men! 28/12/23 The Three Wise Men came to Bethlehem from lands afar, bearing gifts for the new born son, after following...
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Caring For All The Animals (Including Humans!) and Avoiding World War 3! By Alfred N.Muggins
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24/11/24 Alfred Muggins was feeling rather sad this morning. He was on his own at the moment. His wife hadn’t actually left him, but she almost might...
That certainly was a good
Posted on Sat, 22 Jul 2023
That certainly was a good question to ask of the oppressor! That is quite a gripping insight into dictators, a good piece!
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Our world might soon become a
Posted on Thu, 27 Apr 2023
Our world might soon become a kind of museum to the dead if we all invested into these kind of holograms! Would we ever be able to go forward with our real lives? Great ideas and imagining of a future technology!
Read full commentPosted in Hereafter: A Holodog Story (Part Three of Three)
You have packed rich imagery
Posted on Tue, 30 May 2023
You have packed rich imagery into this poem, which describes the place and animals very well. It did remind me of a safari I once went on in Kenya too!
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I started doodling when I was
Posted on Sat, 13 May 2023
I started doodling when I was at school. From there I decided to build up the doodles into proper pieces on separate pieces of paper, which I did for many years, creating many works of my own art which I still enjoy looking at to this day, and...
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Some great descriptions there
Posted on Wed, 10 May 2023
Some great descriptions there: I particularly liked, and felt saddened by 'lost sunsets of Hiroshima'!
Also 'neon dreams of the Orient' , which somehow seems to sum up the present days perfectly!
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I enjoyed the poem. It paints
Posted on Wed, 10 May 2023
I enjoyed the poem. It paints pictures of Japan for me which means it has worked! I am not sure I will ever fully appreciate what it might be to be Geisha, certainly mysterious like so much about Japan, and also beautiful! But this certainly...
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I appreciated the blunt or
Posted on Sun, 07 May 2023
I appreciated the blunt or realistic angle of your poem. I like the way you said it, even though I don't feel too negative about the monarchy right now.
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This is a great and rather
Posted on Tue, 02 May 2023
This is a great and rather frightening short story! You have imagined a tidy future with no waste, in which it seems all of us must plan for our demise, one way or another. I haven't quite worked out whether his final unexpected recycling was...
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So sad, and it does and
Posted on Fri, 07 Apr 2023
So sad, and it does and should make us angry. He should certainly take responsibility at that age. I suppose he will pay for it in many ways as he goes through life. I do think the community should know who did it, and be aware of the danger that...
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I did appreciate reading this
Posted on Sat, 08 Apr 2023
I did appreciate reading this this morning, at Easter as well! You really report your experiences in hospital so well and truthfully. It is a real insight for those of us who are not yet needing that level of assistance/medical intervention. It...
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