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August

By chael

Sun, 12 Sep 2004
  • 827 reads
 

Excitement

to me

was/is

the

stupidly

giddy girl

knowing

the intent of

their situation

was anything

but acceptable

to most.

It was like

cheating the world

by anticipating her mouth,

expel of air and desire

sensory overload

for both the watched

and the watcher

and knowing

they

felt the same.

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