Fin
By beanzie
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a wave slurps at a rock
just below the mini golf place
as it pulls away
its lips smack
an echo rises up
ruffles a nearby cormorant
he shakes it off
flexes his black biceps
up on the promenade
a potato legged child
skedaddles across concrete
its bucket hat flapping
the eyes of mother track progress
vacant dad deep in his phone
checking numbers in his hand
I walk through all this as if
it is a film set
the world is performing
as I stumble into shot
a director screeches
CUT
who let that idiot in here?
I climb the steps up
to little tesco
console myself with
monster and oreos
still looking for a role
auditions start again tomorrow
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This is very good. Gives the
This is very good. Gives the bleak atmosphere of someone who tries to fit in every day, but somehow doesn't quite manage it. There are plenty of us who slip through the net, appearing to belong but knowing we don't. You have expressed this very well.
But not bereft of humour - I loved the potato legs !
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