No reply is heard...

Far they dance
fading lights
they shine bright
in the dark
down they flow...
trough your heart
all them flow
your cheeks glow...

under the moonlight
I hear you cry out loud
Why...You told me...everything was going to be ok...
Pain is heard...Pain now feels

everything looks fine
nothing wrong with life
far those shining lights
falling from your eyes
glowing in dark
of that blue-sky night
like falling stars
running from your sight...

I hear from the outside
while your silence cries
Mama are you ok?
no reply is heard...
my soul chills in fear
no reply is heard...
I cry out to God
no reply is heard...

Panic down my side
Hysteria in my mouth
Teardrops left behind
My fist knocks the arch
Looking to get in
In that old-styled inn
Jesus comes and whispers me
She'll be ok...

Hour by hour I knock
no reply is heard
the cry of the crows
echoes in my head

All the drops of rain
weld with the ones of my heart
Jesus keeps telling me
She'll be ok...

No faith in my soul
No reply is heard
while ms. moon leaves my side
the heaven paints in red
with my last strengths
my pain is answered...

The door for long locked
now open to me
I run down the hall
straight right to your side
my mind doubts before
entering your room
Jesus remembers me
Everything is ok...

My steps finally walk in
My eyes are all blind
Blood down in my toes
I turn on the lights
Surprise surrounding doubts
Mama's resting deep
In her lightest dreams
Jesus comes to me
and drys up all my tears
"I told you" he says
the sounds fade away
my eyes close straight
while the last star goes away
the reply is heard
Tomorrow will be ok...

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The cries of today don't leave us hear the songs of tomorrow...

I would appraise comments, its my first poem so I would like to know what you like and don't of it.
:D