Sunday at Musbury Tor
  By Ossy Gobbiner
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Where the mists blur the line between the earth and the sky
where men carve their names in the grit stone on high
Young Reuben chooses wisely the name he engraves
he will meet her Sunday when he wins the Tor race
Each day he sets off early passion driving him onward
up the incline to Scrubbins while the browbacks trudge downwards
They jeer and they cheer as he swiftly passes them by
each one of them envies his youthful thirst for life
Then it’s back to the echo of the quarrymen’s hammer
cranes relentlessly oblige “more stone” masons clammer
The cogs grind and strip the land of its millennia of beauty
to pave the streets of London for the privileged gentry
One day to go to the race in which he will compete
final character to strike and the engravings complete
His months of training and focus have brought him to this place
Sunday at Musburry Tor he will win more than the race
On the Tor the officials set the distance of the race
whilst the quarrymen below bring the shift to end with haste
Then the cogs stop grinding as they mangle the bone
screams then silence as they carry one of theirs home
She sits and waits on Tor hill for the end of the race
with her fingers the characters in the grit stone she does trace
As she reaches the final letter she sees it isn’t there
sixty years each Sunday she waits for him there
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A fabulous narrative poem.
A fabulous narrative poem. Well written too with almost no spare words. I love it. Congratulations on a cherry pick for poem number one. I hope that there will be many more.
Welcome to ABCtales Ossy.
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Is this based on a true story
Is this based on a true story? I thought the last verse very poignant. Rhiannon
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