First kiss
By andrew-evans
Tue, 15 Jul 2008
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The beautiful sapphire eyes,
Long sweeping locks,
Puts my heart in knots,
The slender figure,
The perfect face,
Makes my heart race,
I wonder closer,
Then her hair,
Sways slightly in the breeze,
Coming from outside,
Where a perfect,
Midnight blue sky,
Lays far above,
A short time later,
We are alone,
I pull her close,
And smell a sweet perfume,
We embrace then our lips touch,
Hers soft and tender,
A rush of happiness,
Beyond compare,
Only known by the passion we share.
By Andrew Evans
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Wow, your poem's lovely. And
Permalink Submitted by Fallen_Hero on
Wow, your poem's lovely. And inspiring! Keep on writing, I like your style! :)
Ms. Louise B
Ms. Louise B
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Awwwwwwww This is really
Permalink Submitted by Mrs_Schechter on
Awwwwwwww
This is really sweet Andy
This place was never the same again
After you came and went
How can you say you meant anything different
To anyone standing alone
On the street with a cigarette
On the first night we met
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Andrew, here you ask for
Andrew, here you ask for people to "please leave comments" yet in all the time you have been posting your writing you have never done so once yourself?
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