Plebs on parade
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By alex_tomlin
Sat, 10 Nov 2012
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8 comments
You
Cut
Too fast,
Take our jobs
And our benefits.
Sit in your ivory towers
And have us believe we are all in it together.
A message from the Big Society: we may just be plebs but we can smell bullshit.
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Comments
I made a mistake in this one
I made a mistake in this one and discovered it too late. You got it right and your message is clear and I sympathise with it. Well done.
;)Pia
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I used syllables and counted
I used syllables and counted them wrong- I'm such an idiot! But I picked the same IP as you-
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Good poem, simple, direct
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Good poem, simple, direct and thought provoking; I enjoyed it.
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Hello again Alex, A very
Hello again Alex,
A very direct poem and I enjoyed reading it but I am at a loss about syllables. I understand iambic pentameters but this poem is not written like that. Can you explain? Didn't stop me enjoying it though.
Moya
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Hello Alex, Thanks for that.
Hello Alex,
Thanks for that. I'm learning all the time
Oh blimey so it does! Adding the last two numbers that is.
Moya
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