The Prodigal
By Silver Spun Sand
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I thought it was a dog, but
I thought it was a dog, but it seemed to be a cat! Liked the digging and the perfume. But wasn't sure about the 'his' in the last line - is it the husband having nine lives or should it be 'your' referring to the cat? Maybe I'm totally wrong, if so, I apologise! Rhiannon
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That was really clever. I
That was really clever. I didn't get the cat thing till the very end.
Rask
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The rhythm goes so well with
The rhythm goes so well with the activity and settling after greeting of the cat. I've had similar conversations. Miss them now. Lovely and funny!
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Tricky one, Tina! Made me
Tricky one, Tina! Made me laugh at the end when everything changes, but also confused me If you ask me, I would say the cat was a men, in one of the nine lives, intending to spend the rest of them in the same way
Like it!
Tibi
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