The Pain You Face

By Ilovewriting99

Fri, 09 Dec 2011
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The pain you face in everyday life
It makes you wish you had a knife
You cut and you scream
But…
There’s no blood to be seen
Life sure to hell isn’t a dream
The tears pour down in a rivulet stream
The hatred, the pain, it’s almost like a sick, twisted game
The scars you claim only bring you even more shame
The pain continues to maim until there is no other way
You hold the gun to your temple and quickly pray
The gunshot echoes
But not one soul woes
For this is the true ending that you forever choose.

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Comments

Submitted by seashore on
Again, lots of potential here but do read other people's writing - stories and poems. Keep on reading, writing and it will all gradually come together (I think scratch said the same thing). I still do lots of reading and we are all forever learning the craft. In terms of a title - you could take the first four words of the poem but that's only a suggestion. You decide!

Submitted by Ilovewriting99 on
alright(: thanks for the great advice!! :D

-Alyssa Leanne