Welcome Sunshine (IP)

By Rhiannonw

Thu, 01 May 2014
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8 comments
 

Sun is bright, and hot and cheery
after wintry weather dreary;
triggers vitamin for bones,
shading skin to bronzing tones.

Extreme exposure isn’t brill,
too much sun can make you ill –
so, cover up and use your sun-creams
maybe avoid those high-noon sunbeams.

I love the sun, my eyes like shade,
pale-skinned however long I’ve stayed,
so in the sun I’d rather roam,
not loll upon a deck-chair, prone.  

[IP: A Sun Bath]

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Comments

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

A brilliant take on the I.P. Rhiannon.  Yesterday it was almost hot enough to seek out that sun cream, but today, it's been tipping it down.  Such is the British weather.smiley

Tina

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you, Tina, a bit of fun! And, yes, we enjoy the sunshine when we have it, the more because of our British variety! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Bee on

I enjoyed this Rhiannon. I liked the fun rhymes and the way you got the message of sun safety over.

Bee

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

thank you, Bee, I'm glad you felt it so. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

This is a great poem Rhiannon, that everyone should read.

Jenny.  wink

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Oh, thank you Jenny, that's a really nice comment. Rhiannon
 

 

Submitted by jeand on

Hi Rhiannon

this was fun to read

My husband had skin cancer - no doubt due to over exposing to the sun's rays - although the cancer he died of many years later was probably unrelated.

I love being in the sun, and it makes me feel so much happier, just absorbing its warmth and light. But I can't stand to sit in it for any length of time, but do try my best for at least a little tan each year.

Jean

 

Jean Day

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks for sharing, and commenting. warm regards, Rhiannon