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Gold cherry
Poem of the week

By span

Tue, 21 Apr 2015
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7 comments
 

I will pin up my things,
like the picture of the out of season beach carousel
all wet on the left side from a basement flood.

In a box under the bed,
old Friends box-sets, and pasta bowls.
You will say you love them.

And then we will take things to the charity shop
and leaving them, feel clean.

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Comments

Submitted by EB on

This is exactly what happens. 

Submitted by Bee on

I absolutely love this. It's neat and sweet. Almost makes me want to cry reading it.

Bee

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Submitted by Bee on

You can't imaging how thrilled I was to see this poem as pick of the day. It really is special, and touching in its apparent simplicity. 

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Submitted by hudsonmoon on

Simple don't come easy. I love it, as well.

Rich

 

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

Wistful and true, shedding the past.

Submitted by span on

Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback.

I was not sure about this poem and your feedback has given me some confidence in it.

really appreciated.

span