Breathy Nightmares
By Amberlou
Tue, 15 Dec 2009
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Like elixir to cure tumbling nightmares the lock, rusted, holds. It holds knitted erstwhile i deeply doze; dreadfully doze for fear of of the wall breaking, susurrous sounds escaping.
As murmours melt the sempiternal screen that divides you and me a slip of the ear sets curiosities free. As mellifluous shouts unravel the tight knit i wake. and step through. I look down to my feet which are icy blue, bare and cold rippling the thin cradles of words beneath them. As my eyes dance up and around i see you. A figure to rescue me from scating cuts.
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Hi there, Amberlou...an
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Hi there, Amberlou...an interesting piece,especially regarding some of the vocabulary.
'Susorrous' can't seem to find it in the dictionary, not mine at least, or 'septiterna'...Maybe you could enlighten me;-) I am always eager to learn.
And as for 'scating', I think you possible mean, scathing. But then again, I could certainly be wrong and often am;-)
Tina
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Yep - makes perfect sense
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Yep - makes perfect sense now...and very eloquently, might I add. How about the 'scating' though? Would make all the diff'rence.
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