Screaming save me through personals

By dgl

Mon, 13 Sep 2004
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Screaming save me through personals

Well-bred, taught manners, educated
Middle aged thirty-something late developer
Own house and car, hons graduate
With Suicide to contemplate
Seeks something more
Than just this boring
Crap suburban middle class
Moderate bloody pain in the ass two-faced rat-race
Fixed rate mortgage part double glazed
Eyes down dull respectability
Force faked humility
Good God help me.

Certificate PG
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Comments

Submitted by innes-may on
Hi, I found this by hitting 'random story' and really glad I did, you've written something powerful and arresting, I really enjoyed the way you've used stereotypes and cliches to create a strong set of images, but it still comes across as original and interesting. Innes x

Innes x