Surrounded

By cassiopeia

Tue, 24 Feb 2009
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Surrounded
A myriad of voices
Drifting by
Living
Moving
I listen
Pieces here and there caress my ears
‘And she texted me that she liked him....’
Lives going on their way
Feeling
‘So we’ll meet for lunch and talk it over...’
Business
Personal
It all passes me by as I sit in silence
I’m surrounded by life
Day by day
Continuous
Regardless of me
Words of love, anger, indifference
‘We haven’t got time...’
Young
Old
Loud
Soft
‘It’s time to go...’
Surrounded

Certificate U
Poem
Autobiography

Comments

Submitted by jennifer on
'a myriad of voices', or simply 'myriad voices' is correct...you can't have 'a myriad voices'... Like the wishy-washyness (technical term, eherm) of the soundscape created, like a drifting conscious...highly effective. J x

 

Submitted by cassiopeia on
lol thanks, have corrected it :)

"I was jogging in the park when I had a bad asthmatic attack.... it was my own fault I should have heard them hiding!"