I Went Away

By dream.catching

Wed, 16 Jan 2013

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5 comments

Sorry I forgot to duck.
The bullet bashed my brain
Life ain’t quite the same.
It took my breath away
Like you
the night we met
and every day
I remain
ed
alive

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I found this thought

Permalink Submitted by Bee on Wed, 2013-01-16 18:25

I found this thought proviking. Wasn't sure about 'ed' though. I think - remained - would still have worked. Please ignore me if I'm talking rubbish. It's just first impressions. Enjoyed Bee

Bee

Thank you Bee. I actually

Permalink Submitted by dream.catching on Thu, 2013-01-17 06:31

Thank you Bee. I actually wasn't too sure about the 'ed' either, so i very much appreciate the feed back!

I'm loving this one, too.

Permalink Submitted by TheCraigHerndon on Fri, 2013-01-18 04:57

I'm loving this one, too. Great read, man. I love the subject matter of your poems.

Thanks again! It's nice to

Permalink Submitted by dream.catching on Wed, 2013-01-23 01:58

Thanks again! It's nice to know someone else has similar tastes

Oh, not a problem at all. I

Permalink Submitted by TheCraigHerndon on Wed, 2013-01-23 05:27

Oh, not a problem at all. I find that when I write poems, the subject matter always turns gory/depressing. Which doesn't make the most sense, as I'm a happy person. But it's good to see that you do it, too. I'm loving your stuff, man.