Rice paddies
By hrmn_jl2
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Rice Paddies
Bustling bursting streets in chaotic streaks of color
raging sea of raucous crowds climbing up each other
mother, child, squealing pigs in joyous muddy home
bent back man with mangled cane jangling crinkled can
The whining scream of the weaving bike rending through the mass
riders coat billowy white puffs back in the wind
like a sail on journey bound ship sprinting through the waves
narrow gaps and practiced hands leave angry shouts behind
Weaving through the push and pull of capricious tides
faces turn and broken greetings meet the difference of my skin
on and through my smile speaks words my mouth cannot
grandmother in leopard print puts food to my lips and I partake
White faded building speckled with paint rises suspiciously
it's appearance forgotten further back at the hands of the scene
each mother's clothing like an ill-matched tale
poke-a-dots, flower prints, rose pink visors look fit for welding
Aching backs and awkward gaits tell a story lost in clothes
they amble forth with beaten bodies vicious as a storm
pressed by life and work in field with spirits never to be broken
sending message forth to us all that often remains unspoken
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Swaying stumbling bus arrives stirring up a nervous herd
seats so precious and hard to find a brutal battle ensues
bony elbows, patchwork baskets, rusted metal carts, weapons carving a path
crushed and lost in the stampede I'm funneled up and on
Bouncing out and onward the bus driver's final call rings out
I stand connected by mingling limbs a tree of life inside dilapidated bus
bodies rub haphazardly as bus navigates the raging harbor
a hundred or thousand carts swing out from hidden streets
Buildings shrink and flatten out and sounds drain to a whisper
the bustle has been left behind the open window lets in country air
winding roads curve mysteriously until my breath is lost
the street is straight and all around tall strangers looking down
Cutting crisply through the valley and into a bowl of peaks
the bowl a great ocean as the green shoots dance through the rice paddies
in unison they flow creating purest green waves that rise and move alive
the waves lap up against a tree covered mount that stands frozen a tsunami
Silent branches untangle the living tree as they step out to haggard shanties
bus falls into the artery of the valley a well paved road through country town
awakened from my reverie I step down creaking steps and follow daily path
before me stands a rubble strewn avenue that many pass but feels a secret still
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Light kissed hanging limbs reach like hands as I make my way to step
children’s laughter wafts down from windows above like faint angel songs
slipping off dusty shoes a smiling child's face peeks spying around corner
I hear a bell and know that children will be gathering above
"Teacher, Teacher" a chorus of voices blend as smudged faces meet my roving eyes
their call for me a daily refrain that falls on my ears a purpose to rise
attention runs so fleetingly my grand mission capsized buried and never to be found
intentions reached myopically expressed so extravagantly look far past basic needs
clanging bell rings, heads perk up, bright grins are shared, excitement reigned in tenuously
students shuffle to teacher's desk to say their daily farewell one wraps arms around my leg
I sit at desk staring out window recalling words and faces of the day
the mountains reflect in glowing but obstructed form on the patchwork quilt of paddies
My eyes fall on a lone figure wading through the thick earthy birthing fluid of the rice
each year the harvest comes and the men of the fields bring it up
and in my desk sitting still I plot my plans and schemes for rising far above the rest
they plant with practiced movements ordained at birth just the farmer and his land
His plot an extension of his heart my what an extension of my heart
for man so lost in his complexities so often loses his power to see apparent things
that the faces of the children may be more to me than a simple means to an end
He looks up as if to talk to me and Burn's words on his lips I hear
"The best-laid schemes o' mice an' men
Gang aft agley
An' lea'e us nought but grief an' pain,
For promis'd joy!"
- Robert Burns: "To a Mouse, on Turning Her Up in Her Nest with the Plough"
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Some absolutely beautiful
Some absolutely beautiful language, here. For me, it feels like two seperate pieces. The children, rice farming and Burns in the second half opened up lots of complex issues. Even though it was in a reflective style, I felt I was left with loose ends. In the same breath, a long poem is hard to sustain and you've done that well. Much enjoyed.
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