The Cave
By j.one
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Final Destination: The Cave
Serge was the first one to have found the cave. We were out in the deep woods of the great out doors. We had heard of a plant deep down in the cave that’ll grant 7 wishes. So together with my buddies, we decided to check this out for our selves. Dennis the computer geek got us a map online. This guy can get us anything on line, and I mean anything. There we were standing at the mouth of the cave, a cave that’ll lead us to the wishes.
“Damn! Guys, I’m getting skeptical about going in there, who knows of the danger that we may come across”, Dennis says with his frightened voiced.
“”Quick being a puss”, says Serge
The sight of the cave was no hummingbird flying over a flower while sucking all the nectar.
“Are you having second thoughts too, George?” says Serge.
“No!”, I responded while touching the gun on my waist that I borrowed from my father. “Why would I be, this is nothing compare to the other day I cut class and went to the to coal minds”, I tell him, which was a lie I may up to try to appear brave.
Serge is the tough guy of the group and likes to act tough in any situation, he doesn’t back down easily. So I try to give him my macho side.
There we where standing in front of the cave, with our eyes and mouth wide open. The entrance to the cave is round, has an opening that is the size of a door, and wide enough for us to walk freely.
“Ready guys, lets do this!”, says Serge who is very enthusiastic about going in.
He was first to go in to the cave then Dennis and I followed him. We started to walk. I was holding the lamp that illuminated our path, while Serge and Dennis have their flashlight in their hands lighting everywhere. So far the cave has been quiet and we haven’t heard of any strange sounds, yet. By now, we had walked a pretty long distance because when I looked back to see how far we had walked, the light to the entrance had become a speckle. Good thing we pack extra batteries because we can’t be left behind in the dark.
“Guys I want to turn back”, says Dennis.
“Just think of the wishes Dennis. You can wish for anything, even for that girl that you are so infatuated with to be your girlfriend” I tell him trying to encourage him.
“You think so, George”, says Dennis.
“I think so”.
“What are you going to wish for, George?”, Dennis says.
“I’m going to wish to be filthy rich!”, I happy tell him.
“IM GOING TO WISH FOR IMMORTALITY BUHAHAHAHAH”, Serge yells off.
“Immortality? Why would you want to wish for that”, I answer.
Then again, why I’m I wishing to be filthy rich?
“Why not?”, says Serge.
So far, we have walked very quietly and we haven’t heard of any weird or scary noises that would make our hair stand up on end. I think I may have spoken to soon because out of nowhere we heard something flapping its wing and squeaking. I immediately busted out my gun, squeeze the trigger and let out three rounds of ammunition. (BANG, BANG, BANG!), The gun went off, trying to shoot down the flying creature that had scare the shits out of us. The shots echo pretty loud after I let off.
“Where did you get that”, says Dennis.
“Its my father’s, I borrowed for the trip.
“Let me see it”, says Serge.
“Fine, but not for to long.”
Serge looked at the gun with amaze and eyes wide open as an owl.
“Let me hold the gun for a while?” he asks.
“But give it back when I ask for it.
“I just want to hold the gun for a while ” he answers.
After everything had quiet down to a silent still, I hear a whisper that got me very unease.
“Who sensed that”, says Dennis.
“It got me feeling intense”, says Serge.
“I felted that”, I say.
An aura of eerie feelings floated by. Then suddenly we were left in the pitch black, with no light. I was frozen with fear. I try turning the lamp back on but it was having no effect.
(BANG!, BANG!, BANG!), Serge had pulled the trigger on the gun. After Serge had shot the gun, the flashlights and the lamb came back on; we had light again.
“What happened, why did you shoot the gun?”, I ask Serge.
“Let’s get out of here guys, I’m about to shit my pants”, says Dennis.
“I felt an ice cold touch on my shoulder. I don’t know what it was, but I started to feel weak and it was draining me out of life”, says serge.
I looked at him and his face was pale.
“This is getting freaky and spooky. I think we should get out of here as soon as possible before something terrible happens to us”, I tell the guys.
“Good Idea,” says Dennis who is full of fear.
“OK, I guess we should start heading back the way we came in”, says Serge.
We turned around and started to walk back to the entrance. It was a long way back to the entrance; we had walked a long distance. Since we were so spook about what had just happened we weren’t walking, we were running out of the cave.
While we were running I felt like something was chasing us, and I didn’t felt like it could be a bear; it felt more like something devilish. Maybe it was all in my mind. And whatever had attack us back there wasn’t chasing us.
“Why do I feel like something is chasing us”, says Serge.
“It does feel like that”, adds Dennis.
We started to run even faster.
While we where all running towards the exit, Serge felt hard on the ground. I stop and turned around to go help him. When I grabbed his hand to pick him up I looked up, and when I did, there were two huge, blue eyes looking at me. Then, Serge’s hand got pull from mine ands his body got dragged all over the floor.
Serge couldn’t stop screaming. He had woken all the bats. And Dennis, I couldn’t see him but I could hear his scream through the clutter of bats flying. Then all came down to a still. There were no more bats flying, but I could still hear Dennis and Serge screaming their lungs out. Then, I Hear bones crushing like someone had stamp an egg. Serge was screaming no more. And something hit my face and it was wet. The fluid smelled like blood. A loud smack was heard across the cave and Dennis had stop screaming, too. And next on the list is me. I wish we never had walked in to the cave trying to find a plant that’ll grant us wishes.
YOUR SOUL IS MINES was the last thing I heard.
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