For Matthew

By kramz

Wed, 24 Jun 2015

5 comments

to my heart you hold the key

in it forever you will be

give me your love and ill give you mine

we’ll be on could nine for the rest of time

Permalink Submitted by kramz on Wed, 2015-06-24 13:10

This is for my boyfriend, please give an honest opinion as i dont want to give it to him if it sucks.

Permalink Submitted by scratch on Wed, 2015-06-24 13:37

Typo in the last line. It should be cloud nine.

Permalink Submitted by kramz on Wed, 2015-06-24 14:04

thankyou for telling me about that but i was after feedback on the quality of the text not my grammar.

Permalink Submitted by scratch on Wed, 2015-06-24 14:19

I think that your boyfriend will adore it.

I'd advise you to correct the spelling before you hand it to him though.

Permalink Submitted by kramz on Thu, 2015-06-25 06:44

Thankyou very much and I definitely will :)