Alone Among the Ivy
By mageusa24
Mon, 13 Sep 2004
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A/N: This is another ivy poem that I wrote. (The other one is called
'These Crumbling Walls.') I think this one's okay, but I like the other
one better.
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Alone Among the Ivy
Alone among the ivy,
Is here that I hail.
Seeing all,
Hearing nothing,
Hearing all,
And seeing nothing.
Forgotten life that I live,
Forever trapped within these walls,
Alone among the ivy.
?It's peace that I behold,
within this life, this place of silence.
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Please review. As I've said before, I'd be happy to receive
constructive criticism if you have any, but don't flame, please =]
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