Love Boat

By a mediocre toad

Sun, 04 Jun 2017
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Fickle cats entice my affection from amid their amphibious dwellings. Through the gentle drift of the old man’s beard, the love boat ambles onward.

23/05/17

Certificate U
Poem
Nature
Miscellaneous

Comments

Submitted by Lonz1234 on

The word choice is really good here, it's short but the diction gets the beauty across without belaboring the point.

Ecrivain et locataire

Submitted by a mediocre toad on

Thank-you - yes, I felt adding anything else here was a bit redundant, although the piece is rather short.