REMEMBERING THE MOMENTS

By moonphish

Wed, 16 Sep 2015

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remembering the moments

while forgetting all the years

this swirling panorama

will confuse the eyes and ears

.

your mind is more selective

searches out the richest veins

revealing golden moments

while removing blackened stains

.

when voices have grown silent

and your eyes are stricken blind

the riches that remain

will still be safe within your mind

POEMS BY MOONPHISH

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Liked the rhyming in this and

Permalink Submitted by love_writing on Wed, 2015-09-16 16:08

Liked the rhyming in this and the sentiments behind 'revealing golden moments/ while removing blackened stains' Lovely piece, neatly done.

love_writing

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so glad you enjoyed :)

Permalink Submitted by moonphish on Thu, 2015-09-17 05:05

so glad you enjoyed :)

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'remembering the moments

Permalink Submitted by Rhiannonw on Wed, 2015-09-16 17:34

'remembering the moments while forgetting all the years' struck a chord in my mind with an elderly lady living with us whose time-scale of memories is getting very confused.
Also a good reminder that good memories may stay when blind and deaf. Rhiannon

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thanks Rhiannon.....glad you enjoyed

Permalink Submitted by moonphish on Thu, 2015-09-17 05:06

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