Running
By samhennig
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Dank air infiltrates
Deep, desperate breaths.
Heartbeat hastening
heavy step after heavy step.
Weakly withering knees,
beneath burgeoning weight.
Fucking, fruitless, frankly
damaging forray into further, faithless futures.
Futures lost within langering, lowly vacuity.
Weakness gives way to tumbling.
Trawling through torrents
Trickling thunderously
through oxymoronic hyperbole that in simile is similarly like a metaphoric, meteoric rise
Which only facilitates the fall, fall
Fall so horrendously hard upon the
grit, grazing and grating the skin
down to the dull, droning ache that caused the faltering fall.
The ligaments lapse
The cartilage cracks
Time breaks,
cars screech to a halt,
not arriving at help,
Arriving at fascination
Driving on beneath the false, flat light of the straining street lamps.
Run over.
Hobble home through pasts so familiar,
despite once being the future you thought you so clearly craved.
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Really like the exaggerated
Really like the exaggerated impact of this, the assonance works a treat, the rhythm slams. You open running up into an onslaught of language. Few typos: simile, droning, cartilage. The pedantic bit of me feels the format should either stay in verse or just go free-sprawl. As a runner, this gave me a huge smile. Clever stuff.
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This is brilliant! Wonderfully crafted and so encapsulating. Fantastic work! X
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