A Fear of Falling
By Silver Spun Sand
Tue, 19 Jun 2012
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On my back
in the orchard...
watching clouds
watching me,
soporifically,
drift on by.
A hollow thump;
over ripened plums
fall, one by
one, by one;
the zealous ones.
The ones feasted upon
by wasp and hornet;
the too eager
to be picked ones
end up rotting here,
carefully secreted
by marsh
and meadow foxtail.
The fallen;
easily forgotten.
Bloated and bruised –
fodder for crows to pick over
and maggots to devour.
I imagine how they feel;
those for whom perfection
comes and goes, unnoticed.
Yet still they fall;
each one
only once,
but their kind –
again and again...
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"The fallen; easily
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
"The fallen;
easily forgotten.
Bloated and bruised –
fodder for crows to pick over
and maggots to devour."
- you always manage to make even the grittiest scenes beautiful, Tina. Another brilliant poem as always ;-)
Magic xxx
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Sorry, Tina, I didnt pick up
Sorry, Tina, I didnt pick up on the metaphorical aspect. I'm still not wholly clear to comment on that, but it is I suppose concentrating on the sadness of death and material decay? My writing and reading is very simple! regards, Rhiannon
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