Remains of the Day (I.P.)
By Silver Spun Sand
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Before leaving my room
i turn, and (stooping
through the morning) kiss
this pillow, dear
where our heads lived and were. e.e. cummings
For a long time
I went to bed early –
after I’d walked
to the top of the ben
and sat where we two
bruised the nettles, hard by
an indent in the grass
where a deer had lain;
its eyes with a glint
brighter than any star
whose one brief glance
could stop a heart
with its loveliness;
but, alas – alpine grass
even in its sweetness
and its silver, cannot
this retain, and
only its form
remains.
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So lovely how the words just
So lovely how the words just seem to slip into one another.
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I know this is sad but it's
I know this is sad but it's also a beautiful love poem. When you miss someone, for whatever reason, praying for them and writing are the ways to still love them. I hope that makes sense instead of sounding corny. I really liked the part about the deer.
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This is beautiful as usual. I
This is beautiful as usual. I need to write more lol
Kayleigh Nichols
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