Malachi's Last Report
By SoulFire77
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The chimneys stand like ribs now.
The river stopped years ago.
Someone is still whistling somewhere
a tune that's forgotten what it was for.
There was a girl feeding fire to a copper horse.
Her hands were maps of fields
that don't exist anymore.
She looked at me.
The stars are closing their eyes, she said.
Then, quieter:
Tell me what your hands once held.
I opened my mouth.
The copper caught the last light
and held it
the way a throat holds a name
it will never say.
She's gone now.
The horse is gone.
The field is just a field
if you don't know what was here.
I know.
My mouth is still open.
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I'm very pleased it works for
I'm very pleased it works for you. If you ever have a suggestion for the IP please do send (claudine@abctales.com) - we always welcome ideas!
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I was intrigued by your poem
I was intrigued by your poem SoulFire, is your reference to a copper horse and fields the statue of GeorgeIII on Snow Hill in Windsor Park?
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The statue of George III on
The statue of George III on horseback has turned green overtime and is known as the copper horse. That's what came to mind when I read your words, so I assumed you were thinking of the fire casting the bronze.and the location of the statue in the great park, symbols that no longer have any relevance in modern society.
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