We Two

By Steve Button

Mon, 27 Sep 2010
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in bed,
your breathing quickens,
outside I hear
the sudden cry of an owl,
a gasp, then nothing
but the trees' slow sighing

Certificate 15
Poem
Erotica

Comments

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
like this one very much steve. you need an apostrophe somewhere in trees don't you? or perhaps not - I just reread it : )

 

Submitted by Steve Button on
Yes, you're right! I'll change it. Thanks reading, and commenting :-)