Just now
By swindonwoody
Mon, 16 Jun 2025
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Just now
just now
you take me
you love me
just now
time move along
like a sailing ship on
the ocean
so peaceful and calm
just love
just now
and the world still
moves along
just now
you take me in your
arms
just now
each room in our home
there been love
there been laughter
we been living
each moment
in our life
just now
every second that
passes
is another
moment in our lives
spin me around
in the sunshine just
now
just now
you look into my eyes
and I know I belong
in your heart just now
just love
just now
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your poetry
Your poetry is excellent Maggie, most people just take a few sencences ordinary prose and chop it up into arbritary long lines. There is nothing to it.
Well done! Nolan &
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