Blocked

By writinggirl93

Fri, 24 Aug 2012

2 comments

I walk slowly, letting the rain hit my face.

I try to zone out and stay in my own little world to block the coldness out.

BAM!

A chill tries to bring me back to the other world.

BAM!

This time it takes me back.

I feel the coldness again and the sounds of yelling.

I plug in my headphones and try to go back, but the coldness is to strong and makes me

STAY

Permalink Submitted by Parson Thru on Fri, 2012-08-24 23:52

I like your poems. Not seen them before. I like the simplicity. Somehow they manage to say quite a lot with few words and a lot of space.

Parson Thru

Permalink Submitted by writinggirl93 on Sat, 2012-08-25 00:32

Thank you. I normally write articles. I figured I would give poetry a shot. Thanks for reading my poems and for commenting