Our love is nature
By andrew-evans
Tue, 14 Dec 2010
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With arms open
I let you in
like a ray of sun,
and in return
you do the same,
letting me crash
into you, like the sea.
Your love
is a breath
of fresh air in my head,
clearing my mind,
filling it
with an aroma,
sweet,
like lavender.
Your voice is bird song
your eyes, the sky,
and now having found this love
I know without it
I'd die.
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Another very sweet and
Another very sweet and emotive love poem with great imagery! I think that 'you're' should be 'your' in the second half of the poem as it would make more sense.
As you're is short for 'you are'. Don't worry I always get confused between the two :)
Beeme xx
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I like this one too. There's
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I like this one too. There's another you're/your typo in the first half:
You're love
is a breath
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