What Are We

By prettyrose

Mon, 02 May 2011
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Are we really like a sheet,
Blowing in the wind,
In a long line with others,
Not sure when its time to
Get taken away.

Perhaps we are weeds,
Have a purpose for a little
While then are trampled on
As if we don't matter.

Maybe we are clouds,
Wondering a long so the sky,
Looks colorful and then
We quietly drift along,
To another domain to remain,
Until were needed no more.

I really hope we are something,
That is useful to some one else,
For if I were a nothing,
It would surely be hell.

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Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Prettyrose, I think for sure, you are very important. To have written this fantastic poem, shows how important you are. The truth is anyone who has the insperation to write is useful, their words are inspiring. I like this poem, because it makes you think. Jenny.

 

Submitted by prettyrose on
Aww Thank you Jenny :) I hope you are as well can be :)))) It means a lot to me your comments and you could spare the time to read my poem. I am not sure I would describe this poem fantastic but appreciate meaning behind it :)))) Take care Keep Writing, Keep Smiling :)))

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Keep Writing xxx