Mightier than the Sword! (I.P.)
By Silver Spun Sand
Sat, 17 Nov 2012
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What fun you could have being small,
if you were just two inches tall;
maybe ride on a snail’s back to school –
make a puddle your own private pool.
Not quite as minute as a flea –
yet invisible, almost, you’d be;
run amok in your sister’s long plaits
then watch as she scratched and she scratched.
If your form teacher kept you behind,
and insisted you had to do lines – say
to pick up a pen would take metal and might,
and his lines take you ten years to write!
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that was fun....especially
that was fun....especially liked the part about sister torturing :) - alvin
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Silver, I liked the 'pool
Silver, I liked the 'pool puddle' too. You have incredible poetic versatility and a prodigious poetic talent. Thanks for posting.
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Hi Tina, this was such fun
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Hi Tina,
this was such fun to read and reminded me a bit
of the Thumbalina story.
Really enjoyed and very light hearted.
Jenny.
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It seems easier to love a
It seems easier to love a small person than a giant. I have the impression that small people are good natured, more so than tall or average sized humans. I think it comes from adversity. It's not easy being small- as you very well captured in this poem. Also made me think of Thumbelina- I loved that fairytale as a child. One of my favourites too.
;)Pia
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