Wax Wings
By Sparrowbeak
Tue, 02 Dec 2008
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I am Daedalus’s,long lost daughter,
flying wax wings to close to the sun,
I will feel the burn,
and I will crash to earth,
like an angel cast from heaven.
Laying among goose down and wax,
shattred and blinded,
Wax wings melt, wax wings melt,
my dying words,
wax wings melt, wax wings melt….
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very haunting. i can
very haunting. i can visualize it very well. good work.
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I think artisus has done you
I think artisus has done you a favour. It's a good start but I really like the re-write.
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