jammie dodgers

By samhennig

Fri, 22 Jul 2011
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A day fueled by Jammie Dodgers and J2O
wearing green espadrilles and a black quilted coat
hair waxed high
looks like plastic
against a gray cloudy sky

you

wearing pink shoes
and a too short skirt

I like you

a day fueled by Jammie Dodgers and J2O,
wearing nothing
hair awry
against a gray cloudy sky

Certificate 12
Autobiography

Comments

Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
A delicious slice of life, I like the effect of the "you" in the second stanza. Shame I hate jammie dodgers but still sounds like a good day :)

 

Submitted by samhennig on
cheers maggy

Sam Hennig