In one night

By magicdarer

Thu, 11 Apr 2013
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I was there
my cap flew away

The blood from my hands
now falls on the floor

No future that I recognize
Hope can only stay for so long

And now,
What do I do now?

Come sweetheart
Come to me now

Certificate 12
Poem
Autobiography

Comments

Submitted by adbates on
"Hope can only stay for so long" That's such a powerful line that affects me personally. Such a short, meaningful poem.

 

Submitted by adbates on
"Hope can only stay for so long" That's such a powerful line that affects me personally. Such a short, meaningful poem.

 

Submitted by adbates on
"Hope can only stay for so long" That's such a powerful line that affects me personally. Such a short, meaningful poem.

 

Submitted by littleditty on
i love a poem that does what this did! -and hope as an idea has the cheek to not believe too much in herself either, and seems to be completely at ease with this -the abyss to longing for..tis just a breeze..to hope. Great poem md.