lol

By 04greevesj

Wed, 10 Feb 2010
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'Who decides whats right and wrong
Who tells me whats acceptable and whats not'
Whos life is this mine or yours
Please dont hesitate to answer
Make your mind up
Tell it to me streight.

Fine be a hypercrit
Do as you please
But just know
When you have fallen
I aint gunna be there to pick up the pieces
You got your own life now and so have i
Life
Whats classed as a life
Lol

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Comments

Submitted by jennifer on
'Who decides whats right and wrong Who tells me whats acceptable and whats not' Tell me, are your spelling mistakes and lack of punctuation (especially apostrophes) deliberate with reference to your opening point? If you would like some help with them, I would be willing to explain correct usage. Regards, J x

 

Submitted by 04greevesj on
i dont really understand punctuation so i just write how i feel at the time and c what people tell me too do with it. lol any help will b appreaciated. jord