Teenage wisdom

By ali k

Wed, 22 Jun 2011
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I used to know
what was wrong and right
i was strong and right
and i'd seen the light.
Confidence is a wonderful thing
but is it just naive
to believe
you'll achieve
where lots fail?
Are you really so much smarter,
so much more tuned in?
Is everyone really so dumb?
even your mum?
Questions? Answers? Anyone?

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Comments

Submitted by Highhat on
I think you captured a side of the teenage reasoning

Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
I agree with Highhat! I like the line: Is everyone really so dumb? even your mum?

 

Submitted by ali k on
Thanks! me too. In a rewrite that is the last line actually and current last line is scrapped, i think maybe better.