one wish

By andrew-evans

Mon, 06 Sep 2010
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If you were given one wish
what would you wish for?
Some would try and cheat
and ask for more wishes,
some would ask for
infinate amounts of wealth,
some for strength
some for beauty,
those who are less selfish
ask for world peace,
no more wars
or weapons,
or maybe to end global warming.
I'll tell you what I'd wish for,
to be able to help
those who I care about
in their times of need.

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Submitted by Highhat on
Touching ! piaxx

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
I would wish to be a better writer. Good thought provoking poem. Jenny.

 

Submitted by andrew-evans on
Thank you both very much

 

Submitted by Beeme on
I really like this Andrew, I think I'd wish for the same. Beeme xx

k.

Submitted by andrew-evans on
Thank you Beeme. Yeah, I hate the feeling of know someone i care about is in trouble, and there is nothing i can do to help

 

Submitted by Beeme on
Me too, I don't know why, (for me personally) I find it harder to help the people closest to me, even though I care about them the most.

k.