Lips must part..

By Beeme

Wed, 08 Jul 2009
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9 comments
 

Quietly our lips must part,
and our hands unfold.
We cannot rot in this paradise
made for us and lovers alike.
Time won't keep as many eyes
will weep ,as lovers grow apart.
Flowers won't always blossom
and the sun can't always shine.
The only way our love can survive
the test of time is through our
many memories.

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Comments

Submitted by Beeme on
Thankyou artisus, glad you think so :)

k.

Submitted by Beeme on
Thankyou Sunday's child!

k.

Submitted by MistakenMagic on
'Quietly our lips must part, and our hands unfold.' - wow, just breath-taking! Well done on this one ;) Magic xxx

 

Submitted by Beeme on
Thankyou Magic, I wrote this quickly and I have had a lot of nice feedback, which I wasn't expecting lol Thanks again Beeme xx

k.

Submitted by Jupiter on
Hey Beeme - stepping up a gear eh? Lulled me into a false sense of security before but bringing the big guns out now ;-).lol Nice one :-)

Submitted by Beeme on
Ha.... Well if I did then it certainly wasn't intentional, of course ;-) Glad you liked this one :)

k.

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Beeme great piece quite explosive very true to life! but flowers some more beautiful varieties and colours. good luck exams corrected now. sorry edit button wouldn't so you have 2 opologies."Lips apart" fantastic way all dialogued is that the word to-gether. julie x cavalcaderl

Submitted by Beeme on
Thanks Cavalcaderl for the kind comment although this piece was by Beeme and not Mistaken Magic xxx

k.

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Beeme my opologies sorry done in quickness for putting wrong name, sometimes I have to work out. I need new glasses! no only kidding.Must concentrate better.But so much to do here julie xx Cavalcaderl good luck work.