A haiku

By campbelldb

Sat, 27 Jul 2013
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2 comments
 

Opening the door
Little one's laughter I hear--
a father's reward

Certificate 18
Poem
Poems, microfiction, Mini-Memoirs by Dan
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Comments

Submitted by Rhiannonw on
Nice one! Enjoyed. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by catherine poarch on
I've never written one - but I like how straight to the point it is. And the action-'opening the door' at the beginning - takes you straight in.