The Night I Couldnt Remember
By daniel_j_coney
Thu, 18 Jun 2009
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Drink can make you do silly things,
it makes you feel invincible when you dont know when to stop,
you think you know it all and your the best but to others you just look like a foolish pest,
after a pint too many you think that your superman - without a plan,
the day after you feel so bad,
sometimes not even remembering the time youve had,
what did I do?
what did I say?
That drink really did make me act in a strange way,
Im sure I laughed, then I cried, got into a fight - then I didnt feel so right,
I should have left the pub early and went home and said good night!
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Hi Daniel. I like the idea
Hi Daniel. I like the idea of this one and I think you could make something good of it. It's possibly just me but I had a bit of trouble reading it and felt that if you laid it out in shorter lines that the ryhmes might come more easily.
Anyway, for what it's worth, here's an idea of what I'm trying to say :
Drink can make you do silly things
it makes you feel invincible when you don't know when to stop.
You think you know it all and you're the best
but to others you just look like a foolish pest
J ;-)
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