Bravo
By Ewan
Fri, 10 Jul 2009
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Someone surprised me today.
A new tune from an old fiddle,
from someone who once had no bow.
Of course, it wasn't perfect;
a sour note from misplaced
fingers, but the melody was sweet.
Nothing special in rhythm
just an exposition of the subtle,
instead of fortissimo bombast.
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I enjoyed this. Liked these
I enjoyed this.
Liked these lines;
'Of course, it wasn't perfect;
a sour note from misplaced
fingers, but the melody was sweet.
Nothing special in rhythm..'
That's lovely imagery :)
k.
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No Beeme :-) The best lines
No Beeme :-) The best lines are
the melody was sweet
and
an exposition of the subtle ;-) lol
Cheers Ewan. ;-) lol
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How can you talk about a
Permalink Submitted by Crackersville on
How can you talk about a masterpiece in such a meta-nihilist way? You obviously discovered a major poet! Kneel in front of his/her talent and win a home made bazooka.
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A leopard changed its spots?
Permalink Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
A leopard changed its spots? or maybe just borrowed a coat for a while...;)
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