Autumn Haiku

By GlosKat

Sat, 01 Nov 2025
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Daylight disappears

Cold nights and warm embraces

Hide us until spring

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Submitted by TJW on

Food for thought, masticate and swallow or regurgitate at will:  Sunlight instead of Daylight.  Stronger contrast to the night, stronger emphasis on the warmth, after all, there's light in the night, moonlight, but there's no contrast there.  

 

Submitted by GlosKat on

Thanks for the idea Jack, but I liked the alliteration of 'Daylight disappears'. 

 

Submitted by TJW on

Thanks for the alliteration kitty Kat.

 

Submitted by GlosKat on

You're welcome, Jumpin' Jack.

 

Submitted by TJW on

kitty Kat I can't do anything but laugh.