Man Vs. Child

By God'sPoeticChild

Thu, 13 Nov 2014
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I’m not calling anyone out because of how I feel right now.

But, this is true.

How Can A Female Have A Child?

But, begs for a man attention.

When their child needs their attention the most.

How Can A Female Have A Child? 

When they need a man to pay their bills.

You were grown enough to have a child but, need a Man to help you.

You need a man when your child needs you.

Seems to me you will pick a man over your child. That’s not good so, choose wisely.

 
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Comments

Submitted by VeraClark on

Sounds like the female should rely on nobody and have no needs at all whilst men can have children all over the world with no financial or parental responsibility simply because they're not the vehicle. Females don't get children without blokes though, so what's the answer?

 

Submitted by God'sPoeticChild on

I was trying to explain in this poem to don't pay more attention to man than your child. Of course, females have children with men. How else can they have it? I was saying don't focus on man so much when your child is sitting their begging for your attention but, you're giving them all the attention. 

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