perfect imperfections.

By Iamber.

Sun, 20 Jun 2010
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I am a flower with missing petals, my steam bent and leaves a color of grace and delight. I am beauitful, yet ugly as my flaws seek a beauty they don't have. Failing to reach the perfection I have within. My stem is bent but I stand talk. Not all my petals are in place, yet I cry out with a joy that only the sky above can protray. I wave and shimmer with perfect imperfections. I am a flower with missing petals.

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Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
hello Iamber, I like this piece. You have a few typos: steam - you mean stem? portray my stem is bent but I stand tall

 

Submitted by Iamber. on
I was typing on my Ipod while writing this, thank you for pointing this out. :) <3I'amber.

 

Submitted by Auntie-Ann on
Thought provoking, I like it :-)

Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
If you fix the typos this piece will be perfect, very delicate imagery.