Old like me?
By Kahdai
Sat, 11 Sep 2010
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If your old like me
maybe somtimes you try
to put the kettle
in the fridge
and the milk
in its place
Maybe, your knees creak and moan if
you try to be getting up like usual
Maybe you like to travel about
yet need mor stops than yusto?
Maybe people call you old fashioned
because of all the things you like?
Meybi you check the doors locked or
look behind the curtains more often
MeB you feel so tired, you could
give up, then see something that
makes you smile and is, worth it
that you feel like being, doing.
Dancing, singing, painting life.
I am not really old atall am I?
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'maybe somtimes you try to
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
'maybe somtimes you try
to put the kettle
in the fridge
and the milk
in its place
Maybe, your knees creak and moan if
you try to be getting up like usual'
- these lines really made me laugh, Kahdai. And the whole poem gave me a very warm feeling, well done! :)
Magic xxx
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Hi Kahdai, I know the
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Kahdai,
I know the feeling well.
Good poem.
Jenny.
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