Triumph over defeat (I.P.)
By Kahdai
Fri, 02 Jul 2010
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As the walls came down,
only stone still stood,
the fires of rebellion,
took down all the wood.
The one most protected,
hidden up in this keep,
handing them over worse
than any pain of defeat
yet, now I am surrendering,
handing over this my sword,
at my knee down in the mud,
see gratitude I feel proud.
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Quite a stirring poem this
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Quite a stirring poem this one, Kahdai.
Well done!
Tina xx
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Love all the medieval
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Love all the medieval imagery, Kahdai - especially the sentiments of the last stanza! Well done ;)
Magic xxx
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