Never Say
By KynKyn_21
Thu, 10 Jul 2014
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Hi, I'm new to this website. And i wanted to know if i can get some feedback on my first poem.
Never say "I love you"
If you really don't care
Never talk about feelings
If they aren't really there
Never hold my hand
If your gonna break my heart
Never say your going to
If you don't plan to start
Never look into my eyes
If all you do is lie
Never say "Hi'
If you really mean "Good-bye"
If you really mean forever
Then say you will try
Never say "Forever"
Cause forever makes me cry
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This is a very great poem.
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This is a very great poem. "Never say what you don't mean." This is what I got out of it.
God's Poetic Child
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