How dare I want this
By leannebates
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I dont want a relationship
but i want to gaze at the stars with somebody who will love me in that moment
me love them then too cheesy
for all we are, just in that moment jesus christ
if we fall in love so be it.
There is an intimacy, even pleasure
I am elated. And still, I'm not satisfied.
Perhaps there is a safety in not knowing
Absence makes the heart grow quiet, I think
but I need to know
Am I safe?
how dare I
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Me too
I want to gaze at the stars with somebody who will love me in that moment
But I didn't know that until I read your poem. Great writing, Leanne.
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How very dare you?
It's nice to be in a relationship but it's also nice to be alone for a bit especially if the other half of the relationship feels the same way. I love gazing at the stars but some people prefer the planets. Overlapping's the best way through this sort of thing.
I enjoyed your poem Leanne. It's one that made me think.
Turlough
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There's nothing wrong with
There's nothing wrong with sharing moments under the stars with someone who understands and feels the same as you. It's those fleeting instances that last forever.
Jenny.
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